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Originally Posted by NICOLAS135 View Post
good shit aka...good shit:

good shit aka...good shit.
the opener was pretty cool,asweel as the wrist dm which is rare for starting a replay. good choice.
liked the decap and I still can't understand how u got that split lol

Originally Posted by GrAmOf0n View Post
Good shit indeed.

The opener was neat. Tad bit generic though. No biggie.
Wrist DM was dope. I don't see many replays that start with one.
Decap and the follow up kick were done nicely. They were smooth n' shit.

Man, you improved since last time I checked this thread.

Thanks m8s \o/

Wip ;)
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Thank you Di.

I seriously dont know parkour well too... its my 2nd i guess.

Also, about manip i will try do... but dont expect too much, plz.
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ok so starter was but kinda common.
Manip looked like you gave up. I donyt like that :/
Nice kicks!
End was too long imo. Just a posing after kicks would worked better imo

But keep it up! i wanna see good manipulaton replay

2.5/5
what i didn't really like in this replay is the opener coz it was generic af.
manipulation was good but try to do fast spins to get enough power for spining uke.
also dont puch uke's torso instead if he got enough spin and you need to raise him up.
the lack of syle isn't a good thing aswell but its going to be fixed with a bit more of practicing.
at all not bad for someone who doesn't make manips
gj
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It's just no one usues my shit .