Thank you guys. Manip again for opener challenge

My best replay ever, i am surprised but still a wip. comments plz and ignore the last part.

Thank you. Also don't worry about the cnc, i am most looking for short comments on my replays now ;)

Yeah, as stated before, you're grabbing way too much, and while everything looks great movement-wise, grabs are a cheesy way to keep him in the air, and they kinda destroy the over-all quality of the replay.

Also, Uke hits the floor twice during the manip. No-no!

The manips is fucking insane


I love it to bits. Only problem is that your movement is kinda lacking, it's to much all over the Place and looks quirky.


Try and look more into making flowy shit,

If you combine that with your insane manips it's gonna be porn worthy

Thank you guys. I will try to cnc back tomorrow
well, i finished the replay and sorry for the bad hits. i tryed during a long time but its too hard for me, so i decided do a simple thing

bump

It wasn't the cleanest, or the most powerful, but you had an awesome idea, and it still turned out decently well. Might have been too hard to do really well, but I think you did just fine! Great job c:

mmm.. mhm.. ok, i am not back yet into madmans. just did it for fun, and indeed, it was really funny. cough sadly in "kill a ka" i had to move uke's knee a little bit, but was a good idea. i will try it without moving uke soon, but i dont think that it is possible.. atleast with this replay.

I feelin the replay , but the ending was really sloppy. I love the opener to death , not so surprized about the grab ( shit , was hard for me to get a good hit with the opener ). Could of done something with the torso at the end , though you chose to grab the legs instead , and you didn't transition in to it well.
6/10
still like it overall , I need to see more replays from you :P.