Soo umm yea. If you don't know I want to write game storylines for a living. Some indef knowledge of me is, i've never taken any class that involves fleshing out my writing skill as a focus. (Excluding English and Lang arts.) So yea. I wanted to write in a weird sort of third person. Just wanted to know if I was doing well and how you guys like it. So please CnC is welcome and yea. If you want me to post more stories then just ask me, make sure to put the genre of story you want. A side note, this story is a WIP I just kinda dropped it because of anime n stuff.
If I continue this story I plan to add diffrent viewpoints of diffrent characters. The genres of this story are as follows, Horror, Mystery and Romance (I guess?)
So yea, enjoy
Chapter 1 (Billy)
Billy is a very bright and outgoing young man with an average height of 5,9 and an average hair style, short cut and brown. One day Billy was going to class as usual thinking of how to win over the love of this life, Kallen, a tomboy who was, like him, average. Kallen is 5,7 with long brown hair. Billy thought Kallen was extremly attractive both mind and body, dispite Kallen's averageness, when Billy bumped into his best friend, David. David, unlike Billy and Kallen, is very tall, 6,5 and has blonde girly hair down to about the middle of his neck. David is also one year older than Billy and Kallen, 17. David told Billy that him, Kallen and two nobodys who just happen to hear them disscusing it, were going to to check out some old abandoned sewers, the huges ones trains could easily fit through. Now Billy didn't think this was a good idea, for one there are old rumors of an abandoned homeless village down there as well as murders and crime galore. David being the silver tounged devil he is was easily able to convice Billy to go with them using less then conventional means, blackmail, Kallen, etc. Billy and the gang had decided to go 1 week from sunday, 9 days. Billy being smart had made the plans for the event, packed flashlights and made sure to bring a mental map of the sewer system Billy saw in his fathers study. Around 5 days away from the trip Billy started asking why David wanted to go down there so badly, David has never had a sense of adventure he was always afraid of pretty much anything that could potentially harm him. It was this day that Billy swore to himself that he wouldn't lose, not to David. Four days until the trip and after school, Billy was approached by a girl after school who seemed to know him but looked scared to approach him anyway. She told Billy her name was Virginia and to just call her Nia for short. Nia was short, 5,3 and was a year younger than Billy, 15. Nia asked Billy if they were going to be safe on the trip, which took Billy by shock, Billy didn't think this was going to be one of the people David stringed along to come, but he did ensure Nia that they were going to be safe, dispite the voice in his head screaming to tell Nia all the danger that lurked down there. Tomorrow is the day of the trip so Billy got everyone together who was going and asked David to bring the other person who was going with them to have a