Toribash
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[Wri] Fates Library
Hi, Fates here.

Most of you may not have known this but I'm a writer. I write stories from time to time with varying themes and genres. Im making this thread as my Library of sorts where I can post my stories for people to see and review. Hopefully I may be able to get some of them published. Before you look down below at my shelf note that some of my stories may range in age groups I will provide tags on the spoiler that indicate what you will expect when you open up the story. If you don't like them don't read. Feel free to leave a review of a chapter or story below. I will Post whenever a new story is started or updated.

Software: Google Docs, Word,

Tags: L, V, S, D, M, T, PT, C, R, [Completed]
L: Language
V: Violence
S: Sexual Themes
D: Drugs
M: Mature
T: Teen
PT: Pre Teen
C: Child
R: Religious Views/theme
[Completed]: a completed story or book.
*more tags may be added in the future and are subject to change in each story*

The Main Lobby


13 Stones: L, T, D, V



The Wanted Series L, D, S, V, M (25k Words) (9 Chapters)



Mystiria L, V, S, D, M, R, (158k Words) (25 Chapters)

Last edited by Fates; Jan 10, 2017 at 10:26 PM. Reason: fixed tag
Updates to the thread have been made.

13 Stones Chapter 1

Last edited by Fates; Aug 20, 2016 at 04:41 PM.
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[VIBE] 2015~2016 | Team Pokemon | [Origin] 2014~2015 | Team Aikido | [Obey] ~Because Frost Said So...
When I wrote the first chapter of 13 Stones I wanted it to be similar the the way the the book Son of Neptune is written. Using multiple single person perspectives. This was written over a few years ago so I am not surprised that the language, grammar, and usage isn't on par. I do plan on continuing it in this fashion. Thank you for the feed back. . In fact looking at it now I can see that it has a lot of work that needs to be done to it. I'll Hopefully be able to get around to that by the end of the week.

Update: Im currently working on the first chapter of the Wanted Series so expect that soon.
Last edited by Fates; Apr 20, 2016 at 08:19 PM.
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[VIBE] 2015~2016 | Team Pokemon | [Origin] 2014~2015 | Team Aikido | [Obey] ~Because Frost Said So...
For the audience of corse. If such a story, or part of a story should ever arise in the library I'll leave a fuck ton of warnings before hand. Its mainly so that you know what your getting into before reading.
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Eyyy the first chapter of the Wanted Series has dropped so take a look.
Last edited by Fates; Apr 21, 2016 at 12:34 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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[VIBE] 2015~2016 | Team Pokemon | [Origin] 2014~2015 | Team Aikido | [Obey] ~Because Frost Said So...
Unfortunately, I wasn't aiming to be like Langston Hughes. All I ask for is feedback that will help me get better as a writer. So if attemping to post and entire series on some random game forum does the trick then so be it.
Last edited by Fates; May 8, 2016 at 10:32 AM.
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[VIBE] 2015~2016 | Team Pokemon | [Origin] 2014~2015 | Team Aikido | [Obey] ~Because Frost Said So...
Fixes and changes have been made to the first chapter of The Wanted book. rejoice \o/ will be uploading the second chapter later today :o
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[VIBE] 2015~2016 | Team Pokemon | [Origin] 2014~2015 | Team Aikido | [Obey] ~Because Frost Said So...
two words, fucking. brilliant. this is exactly what Toribash needed. you get introduced to the plot a little to quickly in my opinion. and the first few paragraphs are a little chaotic and I didn't like the long LOOOONg wait for another character to start talking but I think that it was a awesome story. and yes, work on your grammar and sentence structure for the next chapter. cant wait to read more :>

♥Team Aikido♦OoT♣Team Lenshu♠
Chapter 2 Has been uploaded. Such Cliff Hang, Much Suspense!

Ill be Working on chapter 3 tomorrow
Last edited by Fates; Apr 25, 2016 at 02:25 AM.
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[VIBE] 2015~2016 | Team Pokemon | [Origin] 2014~2015 | Team Aikido | [Obey] ~Because Frost Said So...
Chapter 4 of The Wanted Series is up, Its the longest one yet 3k+ words!!! Would have been longer however, It would have been a lot of scrolling on your part so I cut it. With that in mind Expect chapter 5 within next few days. Anyway Read, Review, and ill see you guys next time.
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[VIBE] 2015~2016 | Team Pokemon | [Origin] 2014~2015 | Team Aikido | [Obey] ~Because Frost Said So...