Thanks for the feedback

Please include the software, and the music used.

Were they even keyframes? It looked like you just went into freecam and recorded.

Make sure the tori doesn't go out of frame.

It's my first time using keyframes, so if you have any recommendations on how to improve I'd like to know

I don't like how you were so close to Ang, try to keyframe a little farther out, and the black border when you zoom in to the other side looked bad too, try to crop it a little more smoothly, the filter like Icarus said was a little hard to see, the first clip was very very very laggy, try using velocity if on Sony vegas, there should be a similar setting on after affects.