You keep landing on your heel. You also need to work on the pose.


I'd say yes to this if you fixed the pose and shortened frames.


current example is better


Not really. You pretty much removed everything I liked with it and replaced it with a half assed and stiff twist.

Yeah you gotta pose.
Honestly I know how hard it is to pull off an axe setup smoothly in tb but that just doesn't cut it for me. You should have your feet forwards and change the position in the air, not axe off the ground in a sideways position.

done sir, is dat good enough?

i say no, you ext your abs way to soon.

Yeah, just realized your placement of abs and chest are super off during the trick.

um
Double flash kgo

Aerial was unrealistic and sthe etup for it was extrmely wonky. Try to not shoot off your toes.

Cork wasn't a cork but reather a half assed sailor moon twist.

Kip-up was wrongly executed. Don't use lowered arms as your tool of gaining momentum. Use abs, neck and legs instead.

Tornado kick. Feels bad to waste the potential of this cheat setup on such a lame move.

ctrl + f

"corkscrew"

just noticed that i have this damn old thing