go to toritube for HQ: toritube link

Please tell me wt u think and how i could improve

nice I love the song and the way you made the words in the video work with it.8/10 i didnt like the shader used(doesnt fit your tori)

thank u very much, please dont 4get to comment and rate on toritube

*bumps*

cmon, i released this not even a day ago and already its gone to the second page xD

if u comment and rate on toritube, i MIGHT have ur babies ;)

be a whole new tori-baby situation...

Ok, i finally downloaded it.

Bonus:
-Music: i liked the song, it has a good rythm
-Synch: u did it very well
-Intro: even if it's nothing impressive i liked how u started ur vid, with the photos and the "karaoke".
-Replays: i liked them, moreover i've seen many(?) sparring replays, it's a big plus.
-Speed/Slow Mo: U did a great job with that, the action goes fast but not too much and the slow mo is almost always well placed.
-Effects: i liked the shaders switching, especially the second time, when u turn back to ur normal shader after u decap uke.


Malus:
-Intro-photo quality: u should make better quality screenshots if u wanna use them in a vid ^^
-Shader: this is a problem i have with ur vids, i never like ur shaders lol. Blue fading into yellow? argh!
-Subliminal 1 frame photos: at around 35 u put another screenshot for less then half a second, it reminded me of the end of fight club, if u know what i mean. U do irt again at 2:15.
-Transition effects: they appear like if u had placed and chosed them randomly
-Flashes: i usually hate them, cause they burn my eyes and unable me to see what's going on, i can like them if used a very few times, imo u used them too much, especially from 0:45 on
-Other effects: watch 0:44->this is ugly, rly.
-Replays cutting: the fight which starts at 1:48 is cutted by a screenshot then u show other replays. I felt like when i was watching doctor house and those stupid commercials interrupted the action. Not good.
-U wrote Editting.

Overall it's a nice video, but it has too many - to get an high vote.
7/10

3 hours? Are u serious?! O.o

O well, big jump in quality in the hq

edited.

wow, thanks, thats really helpful maldiluna!