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[Art] Slightly Magical
I've been working on this drawing for a while now, lost inspiration about half way through but hopefully some helpful CnC will get me back on track.

Programs used: Paint Tool Sai/GIMP



It's a rather rough as of now, but I'm getting there so hopefully you guys will be able to follow me along my journey as I finish up this piece.
Cheers!

The hat should maybe be a bit lower, it looks like its floating a bit above the head.
Maybe some magical glow around the pumpkin to show its doing them magixs rn.

Not much else to say at this point.

Keep it up! Looking forward to see it done.

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Originally Posted by Reta View Post
The hat should maybe be a bit lower, it looks like its floating a bit above the head.
Maybe some magical glow around the pumpkin to show its doing them magixs rn.

Not much else to say at this point.

Keep it up! Looking forward to see it done.

I'll try to readjust the hats position before I work further, maybe add a couple slouches in the brim to give it that true witch-boy feel.
Originally Posted by iAwesome View Post
Hmmmmmmm I suggest you redraw the entire thing, it's shit

Originally Posted by Ragey07 View Post
Use color dodge in photoshop after you're done with the colors.
it makes anything look magical \o\ /o/ \o/

too many details on the scarf compared to the rest of the sketch. either reduce the detail on the scarf or add details to the rest of the image(not too much tho. less is more :*)

I was originally intending to add the same detail level to the rest but I'm having trouble making that not look retarded so I'll probably need to reduce the scarfs detail level. I don't have photoshop though and a good boy doesn't yarhar, so I'll need to find a substitute, maybe Krita has an equivalent?

I suggest leaning the body backwards with the staff over the shoulder and a hand on the hip, so that the scarf can fly in the wind


Edit: unless jumping, then bend the staff arm (elbow toward hat) and tilt the staff down a bit more for gravity effect on heavy pumpkin head part aswell as extending other arm all the way out with a very slight curve bend unlike the other arm which needs a sharper bend,

change the eye sizes to look less flat ( farther away smaller) aswell as tilting the head more left and down, or counter clockwise <--- v

i agree with reta lower the hat, or make is really small and let it float like those fairly God parents that timmy turner has
Last edited by Micah; Jul 11, 2016 at 11:14 PM.