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Eiky: The setup wasn't the best. The trick itself could have been executed better. You didn't really get a good, tight rotation and also the landing wasn't the best either.

10ne: The opening wasn't that good and was pretty unrealistic. The setup is good and the trick itself is ok, but you need to stick the landing.

No to both tricks as far as getting in.
Sorry for my lack of posts guys.

Anyway, here is the first installment of my advanced tricking tutorial.
http://forum.toribash.com/showthread...32#post8830332

All replays will be judged and cnc'd by the end of the week :).
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Can you fix the frames?
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B-Twist round.
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B-Twist Round.rpl (265.4 KB, 17 views)
Last edited by Mack; Aug 12, 2016 at 03:24 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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"Cool delfin med solglajjor" -Larfen
Did a run and ended with this after about 10 mins. Not sure if it's any good.
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Also was attempting a donut boy. I dont think this is it but what is it?
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Fixed le Webster
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Fixed le Webster
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Webster.rpl (167.7 KB, 15 views)
Donutboy maybe.rpl (201.6 KB, 19 views)
Webster Better.rpl (189.2 KB, 18 views)
Last edited by Demi; Aug 13, 2016 at 02:34 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Knock down da walls wiv big rocks and kill all the men wiv arras. - Lamby
@Eiky: Nice trick but I wouldn't say it's perfect. Your moves are too sudden and give it an offputting look. Try to keep your movements fluid. It's a No.

@Nulu: I'm saying no to the webster. The run looked a bit floppy and I personally like the current example more.

Donut boy is nice but it's not a donut boy. if anything it's a d-leg cork. Try to think of the donut boy as a spin and not a twist. Feets should always point to the ground. Setup is nice though. I'd love to see more from it.
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Originally Posted by Nulu View Post
Did a run and ended with this after about 10 mins. Not sure if it's any good.
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Also was attempting a donut boy. I dont think this is it but what is it?
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Fixed le Webster
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Fixed le Webster

You need to stay kind of in a piked vertical position when doing a donut boy, your trick is more like a cork dleg.
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Nomad Moderated Message:
Be more straightforward with your uplifting messages or I'll fucking skin you alive.
Originally Posted by Karq View Post
Flashfull.

Good enough for the tricktionary?

No

Originally Posted by club540.com~flash full
A flash kick follwed by a full twist.

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Nomad Moderated Message:
Be more straightforward with your uplifting messages or I'll fucking skin you alive.
That's not the case. To get in the members list you must submit a perfected and realistic trick listed in the tricktionary. If your replay is good enough it will be added to the tricktionary and you will become a member of the org. Being a member does not give you the ability to do anything the non-member can't do except for acting as a judge. However you will not make any kind of decision.

Also denied
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Originally Posted by ICEEMAN1 View Post
Good enough to get in tricktionary a little sloppy but I think it was good.
Trick: 540 switch.
I rlly hope this is good enough if u want better I may be able to make another one and try again!!!

No

the launch was extremely unrealistic, the landing was poorly done, you pretty much lost all your momentum during the switch, your arms were really jerky throughout the replay, I suggest keeping them contracted longer.
Last edited by Kirito; Aug 21, 2016 at 04:49 PM.
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Be more straightforward with your uplifting messages or I'll fucking skin you alive.