Toribash
Appreciate that Pusga I think there was a lot of things i could have done better with the replay but ill take the positive feedback.

This replay after just coming back I think i did an ok job on this replay. Movement sucks but i think its a solid replay. I had a few options from it, I could have went with like a skeet or a lift but I came into this boom and just stuck with it. First time getting a crotch block boom. lmk what yall think.

Edit:Changed the ending pose in [Filthyy]
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Last edited by Murcinary; Aug 2, 2016 at 02:47 PM.
One thing i dislike is the slight twitches you do some times. Of course,its not something that notable,however on the first time i looked the replay i noticed 2 times.

The way you got that abs dm was alright,but it wold be better-looking if you managed to make you knee relaxed after the dm,it wold make it more fluid.

Other than that,you have some good stuff here,you fluidity is pretty,and each transition is smooth in a level that i have no words to say.

So yeah,work on the things,fam;
retired replaymaker | discord: victortb#9592
thanks appreciate it. Here's something new i'm going to be taking an interest in. I called it Demo but it probably has an actual name just lmk how they look and where improvements can be made.
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Last edited by Murcinary; Sep 20, 2016 at 08:36 PM.
Hands:
Actually...i don't really understand what was that for...
in my side of view,looks like the guys from fighting movies doing their "showoff" before fight....but i didnt really get it.
the only thing here is that you shold avoid more twitches...

Locked and Loaded:
same thing,i didnt get it.
and you shold improve on movements: twitches was already said,and sometimes these moves are weird,likely when you done a transition to a "hand stand",you looked quite stiff here....
retired replaymaker | discord: victortb#9592
It's neat, like really


But, the hand motions are a bit too fast for my liking. Try to do something more that looks a Little slower and maybie even try to go for a selfspar.

Retired
It's improvement man! Looking better and better. Still think you need to pace the replay better, as some punches are way to fast and they make a blur.