First things first, Instagib is not appreciated <3
The opener was alright. It would have been nicer if it was a bit faster.
At about frame 400 I don't like how over extended your abs are and the spin just looks awkward.
When you put your hand down at ~345 I feel you got fast for a moment only to lose that speed immediately after. I suggest putting your hand down a bit earlier so you keep your momentum or speed up a bit but it doesn't look like a quick little boost of speed only to lose it immediately
I personally dislike fully contracting the knees but that's just me.
Same thing with your left arm at about 280-290. It looks like you should have put your hand down earlier but didnt for some reason.
Kind of upset you only got a single knee instead of a double. Would have made it 10x better.
The transition to the boomkick was pretty nice but the kick itself was so weak so it literally looks like instagib.
I know this is super duper fucking nitpicky but you dm'd one pec the frame before the other pec and decap.
The follow up punch was nice, kinda dissapointed in the lack of dm's
The pose was pretty sexy tho.
Lookin good. Keep it up c:
The opener was alright. It would have been nicer if it was a bit faster.
At about frame 400 I don't like how over extended your abs are and the spin just looks awkward.
When you put your hand down at ~345 I feel you got fast for a moment only to lose that speed immediately after. I suggest putting your hand down a bit earlier so you keep your momentum or speed up a bit but it doesn't look like a quick little boost of speed only to lose it immediately
I personally dislike fully contracting the knees but that's just me.
Same thing with your left arm at about 280-290. It looks like you should have put your hand down earlier but didnt for some reason.
Kind of upset you only got a single knee instead of a double. Would have made it 10x better.
The transition to the boomkick was pretty nice but the kick itself was so weak so it literally looks like instagib.
I know this is super duper fucking nitpicky but you dm'd one pec the frame before the other pec and decap.
The follow up punch was nice, kinda dissapointed in the lack of dm's
The pose was pretty sexy tho.
Lookin good. Keep it up c:
Knock down da walls wiv big rocks and kill all the men wiv arras. - Lamby
sorry
