Thanks for the cnc, btw it was meant to look cartoonish, that was the style I was going for.

The way you've given the hair its texture is amazing I love that. The expression is a little simplistic for my liking but that's ok. Maybe it would look good if you added a few more facial features like a more defined nose, eyelashes, eyebrows, lips ect. I also really like the gradual shading work. Very nice.

The eyes are like south park so big and far apart maybe push them a little closer to
each other the nose and the mouth also need some touching up
The hair is a bit plain also.