Toribash
Originally Posted by Iskenos View Post
Replay Overview:
Yoko Otoshi 5: Opponent tries to shovel me, but I lifted him to save myself. When I put him back down, I swept his foot in a crouching stance.I can't accept this because you did not use your foot to do the sweep
Full Throw 3: A very tight full throw, I may have defied physics a few million times doing this, but that's cool.Can't accept this either. For a proper full throw, your opponent needs to land on his back
Ko Soto Gari: I'm not sure if this passes, but I like to think of it as a guard sweep with a floating base. I don't think in this situation it was necessary for a hand post.That is not a guard sweep. A hand base is always required for sweeps. I'll attach a good guard sweep for you.
Double Leg Wrap: A long leg grab after a spring kick opener. Worked pretty well.This was more of an overturn single. Can't accept because there was no wrapping at all.
I have a couple replays for the hip throw, 'cause they are so diverse and I love them so much.
Scooping hip throw: iPrime went for a hip throw but I stepped around and scooped him up onto my hip with my leg.I can accept this, although I do think it could have been better executed.
Leg Assist Hip Throw: Opponent thrusts into me for a knee of stone, so I put my knee in his arm pit and used it to assist the throw.cool move but it's not a hip throw

So redo the foot sweep, full throw, guard sweep, and leg wrap.
Attached Files
guard sweep.rpl (33.2 KB, 4 views)
Last edited by Rouxster; Nov 2, 2016 at 03:21 AM. Reason: Fixed comment on last replay
I don't give a flyin' fladoodle
Roux you're supposed to be a teacher not some art director that turns people down. Explain why and how they can do better.
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Toribash Martial Artists
I did. Check the red text in the quote. My comments are there.
I was brief, but he only needs minor adjustments to his moves.
I don't give a flyin' fladoodle
Here are my backups for the full throw and foot sweep. I have more of those because I do them a lot, but I'll work on the guard sweep.
Attached Files
Full Throw 1.rpl (43.7 KB, 6 views)
Okuri Ashi Harai.rpl (33.0 KB, 6 views)
well that wasn't a full throw. I'll just accept the first backup

Edit: ninja'd

Scooping hip was accepted
Last edited by Rouxster; Nov 2, 2016 at 03:43 AM.
I don't give a flyin' fladoodle
Look who finally decided to show up. I'll look at your app tomorrow; it's late here.
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Ok here is the review.

1st replay: This was actually a half throw. Your arms didn't fully swap.
2nd replay: This wasn't a hip throw. You didn't use your hips to throw; you used your arms. However, it's a full throw over your back. Notice how you throw your opponent from one side to the other with your arm swap. So I'll accept this for a full throw, not a hip throw. When doing hip throws, focus on keeping your hips under your opponent's, and swapping your arms at the right time.
3rd replay: That footsweep was good.
4th replay: You're approaching the sweep wrong. You want to have one hand gripping the guy, and the other posted on the ground. I'll attach a replay that shows this.
5th replay: This was good for a double leg wrap.

so you need to retry hip throw and guard sweep
Attached Files
guard sweep.rpl (33.2 KB, 2 views)
Last edited by Rouxster; Nov 2, 2016 at 05:49 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
I don't give a flyin' fladoodle