Toribash
Don't know how muich of the oepner was raywill but everything before the dms was pretty sweet. I just don't like the lack of momentum. The dms weren't very powerful and were executed from a very awkward position. Try to get some buildup for it and try not to make it look forced. Ech
|Opener by Xioi|#KillTheScootCork|
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"Cool delfin med solglajjor" -Larfen
The start isn't too bad, just try and make it a decap at least rather than a shitty shoulder dm so it looks intentional

Try and make sure to KEEP that momentum going rather than just turning and ruining it.
You have a good thing going, don't lose it.

Overall finish this, I'd like to see the final replay.
Knock down da walls wiv big rocks and kill all the men wiv arras. - Lamby