Originally Posted by Dezrai
i cnced the earlier version on the 1st page my bad
everything up until 310 is fine, its not super woah impressive stuff but u clearly meant to do it and it doesn't look bad so sist is satfistafactory
at frame 300 the little heli kick u did to make him spin is super ugly, in future when u do a kick or push something with ur leg, keep it atleast held or extended 2 put emphasis on it, looks pretty dumb when u dont
the way u came out of the heli kick looked bad too, u sort of stopped halfway through the spin and just flipped over and reset
landing pos was awkward (pause at 240) and u ghosted a whole gosh damrn lot
i am unaware of why u contracted ur right wrist at 217 but that looked bad
everything from the heli kick to like frame 175 is pretty poop y but at 175 that position has pretty good potential to continue the manip
im not sure if u actually want to go through with the decap like that because it looks like ur about to start doing a good manip then u ruin it with a tk decap
i dont think ur terrible because ur movement at the start was fine but i feel like u set very low standards for urself in the replay and just kind of winged it
donot do that
everything still applies though except for the dm part
I honestly did kinda wing the manips, i didn't exactly have a plan for them so what came out was just what i saw was right at the right time.
I was working on alternate ways to set up after the heli-kick but I haven't found anything worth while.
Thanks anyhow <3
Originally Posted by Xioi
People like you are the reason i stopped caring about making replays, i just never will achieve the quality that you're on lmao. Great shit like always.
Thanks lol. just keep doing m8<3
---EDIT
Added another bit of replay, kinda found a way to get up after the heli-spin.
i know i didn't do too great with the dm's but it's kinda still a wip lol
Last edited by id; Nov 10, 2017 at 01:57 AM.
