Any time you use dialogue, the text doesn’t look good. Marco’s [T] clan video used text boxes with his tori at the bottom. In making primarily still shot scenes, more work should go into the presentation of dialogue— that’s all we really have to look at anyway. That being said, it’s hard to ignore grammar and spelling mistakes. Get some inspiration from other video games and how they do dialogue/cutscenes (RUINER is a good example), and tweak it to fit you stuff.

Thanks for Cnc guys

I really like the concept of dialogue in toribash videos, I havent seen a lot of that lately. You should probably see if you can find a better fitting font tho and experiment a bit more with the toris movement during the dialogue, it looked a bit odd to me. Maybe slowing down the velocity during the dialogue would prevent the weird and sudden movements.
Other than that I enjoyed this, the sound effects together with the color choices created a nice atmosphere

You thinking about a toribash film?