Toribash
Is it your application?
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Haver you ever used a forum?
Last edited by Perfect; Dec 29, 2017 at 10:17 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Hi! Maciek here
im from Poland
i most active on Boxshu,abd and judo
im can make logo of AS but not good like active soo nvm
waiting for reply

Council Moderated Message:
Denied, PM one of the leaders for the reason.
Sorry Maciek, but this will have to be insta-denied. You will have to expand your application a lot more in order for you to get in discussion.
Some tips in being accepted:
- Be Creative
- Be Unique
- Try to impress us
- Meet us in-game

Guys, reading the first page you will to get a better performance.
Can I give you boys a tip? You should avoid short applications, show us that you are different.
Show us you deserve to be a member!
Originally Posted by Ripper2423 View Post
I have not made many applications but review this lol.
My GMT is IST and I am a 2nd Dan Black Belt.
I have done Aikido pretty much my whole time on toribash but I am ok at mods like judo and a little boxshu.I am also trying my best to learn to spar, parkour and masing.
I am friends with a lot of u guys and also i wanna be able to defeat all the members in the clan after a while(I am not bragging or trying to insult anybody).
I am very active but I may be a little inactive during my exams.



Rip. You seem like a nice person! you immediately joined our discord and chatted. which is always a good thing. Get to know us.

I suggest you get in game more, find us about and meet more of us. I would also suggest you look over some of the other applicants here that have been accepted.

We are going to deny you for now for the following reasons:
-Shitty application (not gonna sugar coat it im sorry)
Compared to others it is very short and very little information. Theres more text in my reply to your application than your app.
That doesn't look good
give us some information, give us your history on your tb experience and why you wanna join other than to beat us. Which you can easily attempt outside of the clan as well.
Keep up the work and you may see a different result.

You're free to Re-Apply in two weeks

Denied
Last edited by Mikes; Dec 31, 2017 at 11:12 PM.
"People never grow up, they just learn how to act in public."—Bryan White
The application can say a lot about you.We rarely test our applicants and we still have a lot of good and skilled members,tell me how?
Originally Posted by zRush3r View Post
Seriously what do you want from us? Do you want an 50 line text saying im good and a lot more useless crap? Cause it's not writing, it's skills to be on a clan like that. You should test people in-game too. Unaccept everyone because of a text isn't even fair.

Just saying.

Skills do count but it's not the first thing we need in the clan we need people who really want to join us ( so you need to put effort in your app so you show us that you want to get in ) I could write your app in 5 minutes, we're not asking for apps who took you 5 hours but at least show that you put effort into it, first the presentation count when we see someone who used for example titles for each part of his app :

-About Me
-My Toribash Experience
-Why I Want To Join

This already show that you put effort into it, but don't write like 2 sentences for each part then wish to get accepted, we need to know you ! All the information you will give us in your app will help us imagine who you are, what kind of person you are.
In your apps we need to see like someone who want to get in and help us, and not someone who want to get in ( because why not it can be fun ) or ( oh an official clan it might look great aside of my name ). Even if you're a GOD in all the mods, if we totally don't know you and we just invited you because you're skilled ( first I think you should be like offended because it's like we don't care about you at all and we just need someone to get us XP ) and if we don't know who just joined our clan it might dangerous for example if you're someone who created conflicts in the clan it will make our members leave so if we keep accepting ppl only for the skill the clan might die pretty fast. So as you said in your post this is not " useless crap ".

Well we don't need you to write a book we just need to see effort, and if All Star were only accepting ppl for skills I don't think it will be a big family like what Tres created rn ( not saying our members are bad, skills without a bit of maturity isn't that good ) so ye if you're not able to show that you really want to join and you're not here just to "test" and then leave 1 week later so you won't get accepted.

Well not sure am allowed to answer here so if am not sorry.
Last edited by Djin; Jan 1, 2018 at 07:18 PM.
Introduction to my newest application to AllStars

Hello again members of AllStars, today i will be deciding to apply for the 3rd time and hopefully get accepted. My birthday is September 22nd, 2003 and I am currently 14 years old, my name in real life is Dylan and my ingame name is Crow. I found toribash on September 6th, 2014 on my first account named “DJCHICKENKID” but later on in mid 2015 i forgot about the game but was reminded about it by Markiplier. I came back to toribash on April 11th, 2015 and created the account named “DJCHICKENKID2” I played as “DJCHICKENKID2” until mid 2016 and then finally saved up enough money to name change to crow. Like i stated in my past app, many people still consider me as a clan hopper because they havent gotten to know who i am now yet. I have changed since that time period and have learned how to be a loyal and respectful clanmate, i have also learned how to actually help improve the clan and make it a more fun community in general by just hanging out and being chill. I hope you guys give me another chance in joining this clan.

Why I would like to join AllStars

I would like to be a member of AllStars because i have known almost all of your members since the day your clan was created, I also want to join the clan because i enjoy your community and member base. Everyone I have ever met in AllStars was nice and respectful to everyone that i saw them interact with, and if there not being respectful its almost always because they are joking with friends and each other. I have also been supporting this clan since it was in its very early stages by training with the members and warring with them. The last of the reasons i want to join AllStars is because i know almost all of your members and i like clans that support each other and are not constantly pushing and stressing the members out. A short list of the members I know Deprived, Kazy, Zalf, Zwar, Reno, Moon, Trestet, Mafia, Miniemoe, Vanish, Nope, Veoo, Original, Rust, Xene, ShhhMikes, RRdube, and a few other people.

Ingame Info

When im playing toribash i am usually playing ABD, rkmma, lengshu, or tk but i wouldnt say that im good at all of those. I am usually ingame for 6 hours a day or up to 14 hours a day. If you guys ever need me you can always @ me on discord.

Forum Info

I have over 600 posts on forums and when im on the forum i am usually checking my pms or just browsing the market. I also sometimes look at random clans discussion pages just so i can see if i can get into any random conversations with them. I always check and respond to my pms.

My fav clans

Wapow
Liquor
Nitro
Future

Contact me

You can add me on discord Crow#9564

Council Moderated Message:
Accepted, Welcome to AllStars!