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pegasus: in that kiler spar, the kick around 1062 was fucking sick but everything else was kind of lackluster. you know how to move and get around which is a fucking awesome start, i think you still just need a little polish. Loosen up your joints a little! I think the kick around 692 is what bugs me the most, as it uncomfortably shifted your entire flow

i like your laucha spar a bit more. you're shifting your flow quite a lot in this one, but it feels generally less jarring due to the speed of your recoveries.

i think that, for the most part, we should work on the execution of your recoveries, as that seems to be what bugs me the most. you can pull off some really sick moves, just landing afterwards is less pleasant to see. hope i can spar you soon, i think it'd be fun!

Lionet: for a short snippet of a spar, that was pretty damn cool. i love the precision and execution of the attacks. I didn't care much for the last kick but it transitioned into a really cute pose which I LOVED.

here's another spar with shigiezi, and i'm getting back into the groove of things! had to edit my pose because the one i had before sucked, but this was really fun despite it having to be a shortie due to irl stuff.
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Last edited by Marrez; Aug 29, 2018 at 07:05 AM.
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@Lionet

That spar was really cool, but the way uke reacted to that last kick seemed pretty lazy and you could have easily made it more impactful, but I love how your attacks actually connect, which is something most replaymakers neglect in spars. good shit

@Marrez

Your style is godly as usual, I hope one day to reach your mastery of spinshu
Last edited by Glimpsed; Aug 29, 2018 at 12:49 PM.
Glimpsed
Sorry the spamming, but i'm trying to make 1 spar everyday (and the best ones i up here) to get some pratice.

I still improving and i'm proud for these last replays.

Vs. Haku in reality he needed to quit in 1070, so i'm improvised a final, but isn't looks good at all
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@Pegasus: I think you did great in your spar with heber, you flowed your moves to the same side throughout the whole spar and your moves were sweet and better done
You have better control than average sparrers imo, with a little bit of practice to develop more your style and learn your way to fight you'll definitely be doing great replays

Now you spar with haku was messy (he's so clean btw), most of your moves were good but you wasn't really involved in the fighting atmosphere. Though you flowed pretty nicely with him



here is a selfspar update (since I have to leave and won't be able to finish it today). I think I'm recovering my fighting skills, hits are more impactful and I'm being able to deal with contact better than before
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sorry about the silence, my dudes

work has been hell these past few days... I have tomorrow off so I'm hoping to be a bit more active throughout the day!
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hi i am also preoccupied with stuff but by all means if any of you, (even if you’re not a student yet), have a question you can pm any of the teachers!!


or if you cba to just pick out one of us then make a post
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Aright, I'll remember that

though cnc'ing my positives and negatives in the replays I post is probably more than enough for me, so I can be aware of what I should keep doing and what needs improvement. But if I have any specific question or just need tips/opinions, I will make sure to contact you guys

That mentioned, shouldn't we have a discord server?
if that topic is worthy discussing I'd say we should wait until we have enough forum activity established to start a discord server. What's the plan?
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Jatus: sure, accepted! I had to download the second replay to discern who you were and that kinda irked me but I like what you've got!

also, regarding the topic of discord servers, shigiezi asked me if he could set one up and I figured "sure, why not" and we've got one up right now.

I intend on sending out invites to those that show interest in helping moderate it before letting it go live, though. so, lemme know guys and I'll discuss it with you!
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Oh hi I have my old account back
Also about the server, I could probably help regarding the moderation, if the moderation in question is similar to that of other servers, then it will probably be a piece of cake.

Or I fail

Who knows.
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frog up his ass or something