Originally Posted by
Moop
awww, go on, make one of those long comments, theyre the best ones! :P
Thank you :P
But remember that, since i like you vid, the malus things will be about minor mistakes, really. I'll edit this post when i'll have finished, later tonight or tomorrow if i'm tired.
Edit:
-Bonus
Title! Rly!
Shader: finally u changed ur old ugly shader, i'm happy of it
Replays: high quality stuff, i liked the variety too, there's a cool mix between sp/mp/sparring/mod. But the thing i liked more is the perfect balance between all of you, i'm talking about the order of replays and replay makers, the vid never gets boring and everyone has the right space. The fact that you made a sparring fight both with rutz and ern is nice too.
Music: Well, you found your style, that kind of music is perfect for the kind of vids u make ^^
Synch: You are becoming great at this. The speed, effects and replay changes perfectly fit the music (even if in a couple of occasion it goes too fast), i saw that u even made some slow mo stuff, it's cool, do it more. And around 1:15 when u double kick ern with the same leg, i still haven't understood if it's a rewind effect or something like that, but i always see it in ur vids, and i love it.
Pov: i liked how u moved the cam, especially when u followed those long sparring fights, even if ther are some hesitations.
Malus:
-Intro: when ern does the "come here" stuff with his hand you can see some suspect blue trails over him, couldn't you avoid that?
- Impact effects: the cam shaking is ok, the flashes aren't imo, but that's a personal thing, i hate flashes cause i can't see the moment of impact. Just don't use them too much, like around 0:24, u put something like 2 flashes and 3 shakings in a 4 seconds replay, that's "too much". They should be "rare" effects.
-Scene changes: like fnugget said, you used mostly instant replacement (even if at 1:10 u use an effect to switch from a sp replay to a mp sparring) while this time maybe you could have used some transition effects to highlight those important changes, like when u got from sp to mp/ from classic to mod/ from you to ern or rutz.
At 0:58 u put some screens between 2 replays, but this appears to be kinda...random, i didn't like it very much.
Intro/ending: You are still making basic stuff for those parts of your vids, like photos or cute big texts, and it fits your style, but, maybe, you could try to improve that, and make some more elaborate introductions, but that's just an "aesthetic problem", it doesn't change the substance of the vid.
Last edited by maldiluna; Jan 26, 2009 at 08:30 PM.