Skipped to 1:29 because the intro was boring, and took too long.
You should have just made the names at the end. Cam was really ugly. Pay attention to how many keyframes you have if you know you're going to speed it up. No transitions.
/opt particles 0
Don't know why people use this song, I don't like it at all.

You used the same "beat" of the song to sync, and I could easily tell where you are going to sync something. Looks like you just played around with a bunch of effects until you got 5:39.