Toribash
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pew, pew, lazor beems
Hi.

CnC is appreciated. Feel free to suggest a few things as well.

M= Madman
SS= Self-Spar
SD= Split/Decap
T= Tricking
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[TK]- M- Mean.rpl (155.4 KB, 75 views)
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the goblin
Ouch.

Anyway, new replay. Thank Dobby for the wonderfully wonderful opener. He gave me the opener for a collab, and I ended up finishing it that day. Hope he's not pissed that he didn't get to contribute much :I.
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[TK]- Collab- Rawbing you.rpl (239.0 KB, 43 views)
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the goblin
The opener was alright, though the part where you are in mid-air at the first jump looked pretty strange. The following kick was nice, the only flaw I see in that kick is that the decap looked messy since you kicked the head with your shin. The boom afters that was great, and a lot cleaner too. The pose is awesome, as usual.
The ass kick was so damn solid.
Overall, pretty good movement and hits, but damn that second kick was sex.
The boomhit was nice, maybe a little uninspired but it flowed very well.
The pose was great, as usual.
Haha, thanks man, I appreciate it ^^.

Here's a replay to break the normal routine. Not that good looking at all, but I sort of like it.
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[TK]- M- Sickened.rpl (329.5 KB, 37 views)
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the goblin
Great replay TamaKuu I'll be watching more of you try to keep that neck still it looks odd flopping about great replay.
<Fish> How is being a dumbass a form of venting? Is this some sort of flatulence related joke?
Wow, 1 week inactivity. Anyway, new replay.

Watch it or I'll hit you with the madbat.

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[TK]- M- Baklamm.rpl (291.9 KB, 39 views)
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The opener looked pretty stiff, but lead to really nice and smooth double core.
I felt as if the kick was too close, though.
The transition into the next kick was a bit stiff, but the boom paid off.
The angle you were kicking from felt quite awkward to watch.
The punch was okay.
I think if you slammed that chest piece with both arms, you could dm both of the joints.
The pose was nice, and that fist pound added a nice effect,
The first kick was clean yet powerful, pretty good core.
The transition shifted directions, but you somehow made it look like it actually flowed.
Good boomhit, and cool punch, I just didn't like how it hit your face.
The pose was great, the fist pound was quirky.