Originally Posted by BenDover

interesting concept, nice story telling

but i got really bored watching it, like, it was really hard to pay attention.
the overlay was really distracting, needed to be alot softer and the camera was pretty shaky/glitchy on a few of the starting scenes
aswell as a few english errors 4: 30 its supposed to be "he fought them all"
the font was annoying, "blood" always looked like "flood"

the mods/atmosphere scripts/whatever you used where pretty awesome
the replays obviously were top notch
and the sounds if anything, where better than last time, they felt like they belonged, not once did they feel out of place or like they didnt belong to the characters.
camera work in a few places was just fantastic, like the little jiggle at 5:08, between the blades, made it feel like part of the scene

i do think its time to start learning a few new editing tricks though, the replays have always been the star of the show, and i love that, but i would like to see more on the editing side, replays and editing working together etc.
even just basic stuff, like improving the way you use text, your stylistic choices with text has always been pretty horrible.

transitions were somewhat ok, for the story telling theme, but its a bit old and boring.
maybe some basic colour correction or colour scheme, just so that the overall theme is carried through and it all feels like a unit.