Toribash
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eazi Replays
I've been playing this game for under two months (so go eazi on me)
These are my first two replays Im posting here.
Any comments on how I can improve? :3
Thank you
Attached Files
Navid1st.rpl (84.7 KB, 18 views)
Navid2nd.rpl (117.4 KB, 11 views)
Navid3rd.rpl (30.2 KB, 9 views)
Last edited by eazi; Jan 8, 2013 at 12:47 PM. Reason: added the third
My new replay
It also has a glitched version that looks even better lol

comments plz? D:
Attached Files
navid8th.rpl (65.9 KB, 11 views)
Navid8thglitched.rpl (85.1 KB, 10 views)
Just because you commented on me:

1. First thing was really random and stiff. Glute DM could be done better and cleaner and maybe improved. Pec DM was weak because it was a little punch and it didn't gain much momentum.

2. Looked like a foot mod. It was just glitch so nothing interested.
Originally Posted by patrickooo View Post
Just because you commented on me:

1. First thing was really random and stiff. Glute DM could be done better and cleaner and maybe improved. Pec DM was weak because it was a little punch and it didn't gain much momentum.

2. Looked like a foot mod. It was just glitch so nothing interested.

Thanks for the comment. That replay took me a long time to make. I've just started making replays so I'l work harder to get better.
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New Replay!
It took me about 1.5 hour to make (Im getting better)
Comments plz
Attached Files
navid10th.rpl (93.2 KB, 18 views)
Last edited by eazi; Jan 10, 2013 at 02:26 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Originally Posted by niceflames View Post
Keep trying harder, navid10th looked the best out of all of them. But in it you had some kicks that you could have made smoother or got a dm out of it. Try using Shift+P on your keyboard to skip frame by frame instead of the set amount of turn frames.

Thanks for the comment, I didn't know about the shift+P thing. I've already started using it.
Here's my new replay. I think it's my first decent replay, I really like it :3
Attached Files
eazi.rpl (123.8 KB, 13 views)
It's good but you need to work on putting more movements inbetween dms to keep the looker interested in the replay because there were some uncomfortable pauses between the kick and the weird looking butt dm.
<BISH> kick chan my modes are moving on their own~
<Shook> FLAGGOTS
New replay
It's a bit too messy though :/
Comments would be appreciated
Attached Files
eazi-blah.rpl (139.6 KB, 8 views)
Well next time post your thread link instead of the replays.
My new replay with nirs-balancedhamer opener. Nirs is my idol :3
Head decap at the end btw
Please please comment D:
Attached Files
eazi-nirsopener.rpl (153.9 KB, 18 views)
Was too boring before the split -.- And the split isn't really aimed good too.
???????????????????????????????? Dunno what was the deal of the random pec DM.
Decap was really weak.
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