Photon: Opener was slightly odd and stiff, but the destruction after that was pretty good, though really messy. You could have grabbed his glutes at the end and go for another hit, your arms were in the right positions, and you had enough frames. Pose was pretty good.
Something We Asians Got: Too much grab in this one, and you shouldn't kick with both legs, it's much weaker than a normal one. This one was too floppy imo, and you might have been able to grab his torso for a final hit at the end. Pose could be improved.
I do some videos
Feel free to PM me for any video-related questions
Great replay. The opener was great, but the jump looked kind of weird. The only thing that's relatively not good is that you were kind of jerky. You would do something and then nothing and then all of a sudden you would do something else. Overall, 8.5/10 Great job!
You went back and forth a lot. Try to keep it going in one fluid motion unless you know its going to look good. Also, try to keep your neck held or extended. A floppy head looks weird.
You went back and forth a lot. Try to keep it going in one fluid motion unless you know its going to look good. Also, try to keep your neck held or extended. A floppy head looks weird.