Toribash
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[ViD] #OcE II [eP]
Hello everyone!


Well I've no time in recent days. But I managed to do a OCE, was not very good. But I think it also is not too bad. Besides being the first video I use RT.
So criticize it as deemed necessary that I'll improve next.

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stop
please
stop

you edited this the lazy way too much
all you did was split whenever you wanted sync
when the drop came you could've done SOMETHING to the replay that was creative or even video edited, but man.
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
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Originally Posted by Tyzi View Post

stop
please
stop

you edited this the lazy way too much
all you did was split whenever you wanted sync
when the drop came you could've done SOMETHING to the replay that was creative or even video edited, but man.

No. There's nothing to see. Just because I made a video like this. Not to say that I imitated. Many people comment on this Various videos.
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Originally Posted by Slycooper View Post
agreed.

I don't like how the video worked up to a certain point in the replay, then as the 'drop' came, you switched back to the beginning of the replay. That ruined it for me. The music gets intense after the drop, I feel like you should've used freecam and cut to somewhere else in the replay.

Hmmm Thanks for the tip sly. I'll make a video in future.
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Originally Posted by Hours View Post
i liked the cc.
it was kinda strange to see the same replay two times, even if the first time it was only 3/5 of it.
the "TV Simulator" seemed too intense and off place.

Yes, I really messed up in the intensity of tv simulator.
Last edited by TORIITO; Jun 22, 2013 at 08:25 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump

Artist. Sometimes.

Originally Posted by Wesmrocks View Post
No, you did imitate R4ff. Same song, literally the same effects, same freecam, similar replay, etc. You clearly intended to make your video just like his.

No. From the moment I created the video and tell you I DO NOT imitated, I have not imitated. That's what you said and YOUR say.

Artist. Sometimes.