Can I get some criticism on this, its my first design coming back.

Here http://prntscr.com/28sr3x


The link is safe I don't really know how to put the image in a spoiler sorry I'm new.

I like it, but for the 3D perspective, it looks like the focal point isn't on the R like i would think it should be. It looks like it is between the I and the R because you can't see the right side of the I and also the ride side of the V. While you can see the left side of the A and the L.

Not sure if you understood what I am trying to say. If not just ask.

I understand what your saying I was being careless and rendered the text like that without checking and then I was even more careless by exiting without saving

It still could have passed as good :P Just next time, center the focus point and build off of that. Good work though!

Thank you

Very nice, but it's not centered all the way

Looks very nice. The letter perspective is a little strange, though, like they were saying. It seems like the letters are thicker in some places, and some are thicker than others entirely, due to the perspective. I like the glow and the cracks in the letters, as well as the background textures. Nice job.