Toribash
Original Post
Hello, I could use some advice.
Hi, I am not the best at making replays and I need to choose my best 2 replays and this is where you can help.

please tell me which 2 I should pick seeing as I'm completely lost.

Apparently I need 2 madman replays for a video.

Thanks for your time :P
Attached Files
funky #1.rpl (112.2 KB, 7 views)
Goughy1210 - kaboomboom.rpl (118.4 KB, 6 views)
Goughy1210 - something.rpl (87.6 KB, 5 views)
Goughy1210 - desimated.rpl (148.0 KB, 5 views)


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LegGang
Funky: That was pretty good. The opening bit where you contracted and extended your knees was kind of... odd. The first kick could have been a little more relaxed, and maybe another dm. The second kick was pretty nice. Overall, 7.5/10

Cristmas special: In the beginning part, you were kind of floaty. Move around a little more, it made the whole first part a little boring and slow. That split was beautiful, after that, your legs were contracting and extending a lot when you were trying to get the decap. The next kick was awesome, great job! Then you did that last flip and it was a little stiff. The pose was good though. Overall, 8/10

Kaboomboom: The first part was good. Once you got into the kicks you started to get really stiff. Try to relax what you're not using (Arms, knees, etc.). The last kick was great. In the pose, even though you only had 20 or 30 frames left and you were in the air, bending your knees would have looked good. Your legs were pretty stiff. Overall 8.3/10

That's all I'm doing for now, because I don't want to cnc three more replays. Keep practicing and you'll be better than you already are.
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