A whole lot of stiffnes.
The opener. I dont know if I should say it was interesting or wierd.
Split was kay.
Here is a little something I learned from larflarf. If you are doing a decap, it should either be the last hit, or a hit that stands out. Your decap just somehow happened, with no build up or attention. I personally had to re-watch the replay 2 times to see what got the decap.
The kick following could have been a boom, but lets let that be.
The stomp just seemed a bit too much. It just seems like a try to get more dms.
The spin to the, well, anti-pose was stiff.
You got some stuff down, keep practiving and you will become dang good.