Toribash
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[R]A Simple Set for 20k-40k
I would like a black and white set that's not too detailed, but still looks nice. I'd also like it to be a cartoon set.
512x
Price will vary depending on how much I like it
Paying in tc.
Just ask for any more details.
Be sure to post WIP's so I can see!
Last edited by Irrita; Apr 18, 2014 at 01:54 AM.
Ryan is Straight {TGS} {Videoer} {Artist} Rip Dog
I don't really like the style of that head. Try just using black and white. it doesn't have to be realistic either. I was looking for a cartoon style. I should probably add that into the first post.
Ryan is Straight {TGS} {Videoer} {Artist} Rip Dog
Just use black and white. It doesn't have to be human. Just try to create something off the top of your head and see where it goes.
Ryan is Straight {TGS} {Videoer} {Artist} Rip Dog
If the premade set actually fits the criteria and I like it then yes.
Ryan is Straight {TGS} {Videoer} {Artist} Rip Dog
LeB3ast: Dl/lp Hours or Pulse. Something like that. Besides, the one you made has a good design, but it isn't clean and it's kind of crowded. I don't need a ton of details.
Ryan is Straight {TGS} {Videoer} {Artist} Rip Dog

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The parts I circled in red don't flow very well. It shouldn't have edges. The part I circled in blue I don't really like. Maybe make it solid black and then put some more white in under the eyes. I'd also like you to take out the stripe down the middle of his face. The parts I circled in yellow go up too high. The eyes also seem a little small, but I haven't seen it on a head.
Ryan is Straight {TGS} {Videoer} {Artist} Rip Dog
Looks alright. Can you make the bottom of the feet black and add more detail to the sides of the hands? Also, if you could add that stripe on the head back in, that would be great.
Ryan is Straight {TGS} {Videoer} {Artist} Rip Dog
Now that I'm thinking about it, can you add some gray to the edges just to give it a cleaner look? I mean around the black.
Ryan is Straight {TGS} {Videoer} {Artist} Rip Dog
Can you make the eyes a little bigger. Also, I'd just like the gray to be medium sized on the triceps and on the legs and thighs.
Ryan is Straight {TGS} {Videoer} {Artist} Rip Dog