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[Music] Rise
Cheshy time!!!
No but seriously, a new Track, this one has been my baby for a while now.
One of the melodies needs a fix and the ending is still in the works, but this one is about ready for release so here you go!
https://soundcloud.com/luxcheshyre/rise
Comment and as always, listen and enjoy!
Constructive criticism is always appreciated.
~Cheshyre
No but seriously, a new Track, this one has been my baby for a while now.
One of the melodies needs a fix and the ending is still in the works, but this one is about ready for release so here you go!
https://soundcloud.com/luxcheshyre/rise
Comment and as always, listen and enjoy!
Constructive criticism is always appreciated.
~Cheshyre
Originally Posted by Rexoa
I imagine people slow-walking in armor with flags and stuff. lol
I don't know much about orchestral music, but I'll try my best to crit the dance parts.
Kick seems too quiet compared to other sounds, like at 1:10. I can just faintly make it out.
2:22 has that nice little cut-off intro, that I like. I usually do that in a lot of my new songs. :P
The second "drop" or w/e sounds a lot better in terms of drums, but I couldn't make out a
buildup. Maybe some sort of tone that goes up in pitch or reversed reverb sound that goes until 2:54?
I like the synth patterns a lot. Very well eq'ed. Stuff like that sounds really good to me when it's only that pattern,
the kick drum, and some sort of bass. But you pulled that off, even with the clap. o/
Love your comment, love your educated criticism. I will take your comment into account. Thanks!
Originally Posted by Kradel
Very Unique. I loved the drop, sounded like trap
Can I download this and repost on my SC as an edited version.
LuxCheshyre // Rise // Oaki Remix
I can see it now.
Ill set it to Download, and sure I do not mind. :P
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Originally Posted by Haunter
Hmm, this is very interesting and cool. I'm liking the whole vibe of this song.
You know what this calls for?
T-T-T-TRAP REMIIIIIIX
Lol ill have to get more time to Skype again lol! Like I said ill set to Download.
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Originally Posted by etoria
I didn't like the clapping, and the lower notes could've turned the minor to a major sometimes, for more depth.
I WOULD'VE PLAYED IT ON THE PIANO AND RECORD MYSELF, BUT SOMEONES FUCKING COMPUTER IS AS GAY AS A STRAIGHT MAN ISN'T.
FUCK.
I see what your saying. Ill look into it. And thats unfortunate! Upgrade your Rig :P
Last edited by Cheshyre; Apr 21, 2014 at 11:34 PM.
Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Originally Posted by Orfeas
This is funky, love it! But, in my opinion keeping it Orchestral and Medieval, with darker and louder sounds, would be better!
I might release a fully orchestral song then :P
Ive always like mixing Orchestral and....well anything!
Thanks for the comment!
