;-; You do realise nobody's going to pay attention to the format you set out
Anyways
Negative: Song was slightly repetitive and as Oopyuman said it's quality was horrible. Screen pumps/pulses weren't done
that well. Also you should work on your transitions, the first replay just kinda cut into the second one
Positive: The freecam was decent, and I see you were trying new effects and stuff, which is always a good thing.
Rating: 6/10 (I don't really see the purpose of ratings and I don't rate much either so here's a random number I pulled out of nowhere)
Tips: Sync the music to the tori. Screen pumps and other effects come afterwards to make the existing video look better. If the replays don't look good standing alone, chances are you should go back and fix it up a little. If you want to see a good example of the use of screen pumps you can check out Sly/Avi's
Infinite Daps video
Find a good quality song and stick with it, don't mess about with the volume.
Turn off blood unless it fits the video