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[VID]Sun
I DIDNT USE AN EDGY SONG W0W



program : aae cs6
song: idk something modest mouse space gang remix

cnc please
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Originally Posted by Havu View Post
Yeah, it feels held back cause you don't go all the way with the quickscopes before cutting them.
The velo at 0:05 looks weird.
The ending is shit, why did you leave it like that with no music fades and a cine that's under half a second long?

there is a music fade but i didn't render it out. sorry about that.
and if i went through with the quickscopes it would be very ugly, trust me the original wip i had did, and the movement of the gun scope was bugging me.
I wish i had someone to record for me.

but anyways,

my next edit will be atleast 20 seconds since it will be an app, and ill work on the velo, i didn't want to cut the clip there because it looked weird to me, so i sped up the bolt and cut after he starts bolting back in.
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It's better than your previous stuff

First shots looked a bit odd with the screen rotation/pump thing but the rest are decent, imo gun sounds would have made it a bit better

Good luck on the next vid and stuff, some effects would be cool
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