Toribash
Originally Posted by Slycooper View Post
your ending is too sudden
always
every time
fix it

and no dont do the slow mo outtro shit either

ill work on endings, thanks 4 being constructive fam

Originally Posted by Hours View Post
theres no doubt that you've got the flow down and perfected it
but what sly said, the ending is too sudden

thanks for promoting fox wedding
he's awesome and i didn't even know about him

thanks, i've been working on flow a lot,
ill work on my endings

no problem.
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0:05 - 0:07 doesn't look very good to me
i'm not sure if these are prerecs, but the cine is really bugging me, and the transition moving downwards with the movement of the cine didn't make very much sense, on top of transitioning into a very boring, static scope

you're good now, just not creative enough
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

Slowmo.
Nice timing.
Pro sync.
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Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up