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[VID] Rap Music video

Now, I didn't make the song nor the lyrics nor am I in this video.

I am sharing this in Art because I started off with just random clips and made a whole music video out of them with effects and all.

What program do I use:
Sony Vegas Pro 13.0

How long have I been using it:
Only a month and already this good.

Please do not flame/hate, if you must give criticism, please do it in a mature way.

I want feedback on the video effects and style and flow of the video
ALL FEEDBACK ABOUT THE SONG WILL BE REPORTED FOR USELESS POSTING!
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i will do this but being mature about this is really hard

the whole nature of this music video and it's presentation doesn't in any way seem mature.
your panning is really, really, really bad. there is no rhyme or rhythm to it, you just make keyframes look however you want and the program just decides to try to make the path that you've created-- which is random positions it seems.

you also didn't even film half of this video, you should probably credit the original owners of everything that isn't you standing in front of that dude acting like an ass.
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
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"How long have I been using it:
Only a month and already this good."
I don't know what good is in your dictionary but in mine this is no where near it.
The editing is all nasty in my opinion.
His lyrics don't even go with the beat which hits the ears wrong.
I can barely hear his voice over this horrid music.
And if you're going to make his voice raw stop having it in repeat.
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Im convinced that this is a troll, it HAS to be!

Well serious feedback doe, have you ever seen a music video that has half of the screen covered in black dirt and is CC'd to look like 1 colour?
Clearing you footage might improve the overall quality. Also randomly edited clips of gangsta shizz brings more of a comedic vibe to the video.
Originally Posted by rcnerf2 View Post
"
What program do I use:
Sony Vegas Pro 13.0

How long have I been using it:
Only a month and already this good." LOL

Originally Posted by Hours View Post

Originally Posted by Organs View Post
i was really hoping the train would come

you guys are a bunch of fucking idiots
not funny or cool
consider finding someplace to record that isnt just somewhere in the middle of nowhere, its ugly to look at with all the effects you slapped on. before you keep making more videos like this for people i suggest you learn everything about sony vegas or if you decide to move on to something else because this looks really slapped together
stop using those clips or whatever, they dont fit with the rest of the video at all, and i would hate to call this a music video, why would i want to watch some guy being an idiot with terrible quality music in the background for 2 minutes? troll or not you should learn what youre doing or watch other videos to get a grasp on what you should be doing

ignore all the idiots posting theyre just faggots
this is perfect keep doing what you do fam this shits 300 percent gutta
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no negative connotation intented with this question, but why is the audio quality on the rapping muffled and on on the song? it sounds like someone put a lowpass filter on his voice
oh yeah