Pretty cool and smooth in a lot of places.
I really liked the split before the dms started as well
A few errors (hue hue hue):
I didn't like how your right arm held all in the opener. It would be pretty cool if it was held there for a shorter period, but it was there a bit too long for my taste.
I'm not a fan of the second punch (the one that breaks the chest). It seems like it wasn't planned too far in advance, like you only really started paying attention to it once the first dm was basically done. Its good to set up followup hits well before the preceding hits (if possible). Thinking about your followup provides smoother replays overall.
Head bruise
A bit of weird stepping around getting into the pose
pretty cool though bruh
I really liked the split before the dms started as well
A few errors (hue hue hue):
I didn't like how your right arm held all in the opener. It would be pretty cool if it was held there for a shorter period, but it was there a bit too long for my taste.
I'm not a fan of the second punch (the one that breaks the chest). It seems like it wasn't planned too far in advance, like you only really started paying attention to it once the first dm was basically done. Its good to set up followup hits well before the preceding hits (if possible). Thinking about your followup provides smoother replays overall.
Head bruise
A bit of weird stepping around getting into the pose
pretty cool though bruh
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Originally Posted by Larfen
Pretty cool and smooth in a lot of places.
I really liked the split before the dms started as well
A few errors (hue hue hue):
I didn't like how your right arm held all in the opener. It would be pretty cool if it was held there for a shorter period, but it was there a bit too long for my taste.
I'm not a fan of the second punch (the one that breaks the chest). It seems like it wasn't planned too far in advance, like you only really started paying attention to it once the first dm was basically done. Its good to set up followup hits well before the preceding hits (if possible). Thinking about your followup provides smoother replays overall.
Head bruise
A bit of weird stepping around getting into the pose
pretty cool though bruh
Thank you my man.
I was tired as fuck by the time I got to the pose.
So I winged it.
Thanks for the CnC guys.
The Review:
I liked it up to the point where you grabbed, you leaned really far back and just seemed to get out of balance. Next time maybe move the grabbing hand less speed focused or re-raise so you get on your feet again
You did seem to get out of it without it looking too bad
It's also quite a bummer that you got your own head hit but oh well
The Yes:
- Pretty fluid
- Not too long
- smooth DMs
The No:
- Lost balance
- Leaned back too far (this led to losing balance)
- (got your head hit)
The Score ;o
if I had to rate this madman it would get a 7/10
It wasn't anything too special but there was also nothing really bad
I liked it up to the point where you grabbed, you leaned really far back and just seemed to get out of balance. Next time maybe move the grabbing hand less speed focused or re-raise so you get on your feet again
You did seem to get out of it without it looking too bad
It's also quite a bummer that you got your own head hit but oh well
The Yes:
- Pretty fluid
- Not too long
- smooth DMs
The No:
- Lost balance
- Leaned back too far (this led to losing balance)
- (got your head hit)
The Score ;o
if I had to rate this madman it would get a 7/10
It wasn't anything too special but there was also nothing really bad
basically a beyblade that can jump.
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