https://soundcloud.com/ratbicycle/bullet-train
I figured I'd share this with people because I don't feel too bad about how it turned out
I used FL Studio 12

that drum loop is awesome
im not sure how i feel about 1:24, i think that it could work really well if the sample/synth you used sounded a bit more "ethereal", if that even makes sense. maybe a subtle delay or reverb is what i would put on it

drum chopping at around 2 minutes was very welcomed, just when the loop was about to get a bit tiring. not overly complicated but it was just enough to keep my attention, nice job

everything after that was pretty much similar. i think i would have introduced the cymbal at 4:12 earlier in the song, but its not a huge issue to me, i didnt feel like it was missing before

sweet d:)