why did you need to use a fancy font for your placeholders
anyway effect was kinda cool i guess
transitions would have been smoothif there was actually anything to transition to
i think you've gotten really good, but i don't think i can ever offer anything to say except that your choice of music is really limiting the "wow this is cool" factor.. i dare you to try to use something else. could be just as slow and quiet, but something with more sound to it, similar to kasull