So I've been putting off making this thread until I made a couple decent replays, but I realized that'd never happen so... now's as good a time as any. I wouldn't have made it at all if not for the prompting of a friend of mind... So thank/blame them for whatever happens here.

But, since I am here, I'd really appreciate some tips on how to improve. I'm pretty trashy right now so every little bit helps.

http://speedy.sh/pa84e/The-twitches-x.x.rpl - I made that one like... three weeks ago? Four weeks ago? It's terrible so you can ignore it.

http://speedy.sh/ZTq9X/Fuck-me-I-give-up.rpl - This happened last week I think

http://speedy.sh/5sFAc/aaa.rpl - Last week


Let the roasting begin.

ur liek rly bed n u shuld liek stop cus i bettr

jk cool replays but work a bit on movement

Thanks guys <3

It helps a ton, I appreciate it.

http://speedy.sh/JgJcS/Scrap001.rpl

Just a scrap. I kept trying to get that elbow dm for way way way too long