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[TEX]Full jointed Set
So yeah i just finished this set today and would be very pleased about feedback
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Pretty good I would say, not much on the arms but what a good set.
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wooow damn those feedbacks and how fast.
heuheu
thanks guys

@bird: ofc.. the lines are thicker than normal, thought that thin lines make it harder to realize the pattern
@ares: yeah indeed don't wanted to cover the whole body, wanted a bit space in it
something new like bird said woo \o/
@Moop: just <3

Water Melon, Fire Melon, Earth Melon, Air Melon... The ELEMELONS!
The head is the best part of the set. I would love to see a different head for the set and a matching body for the current head.
The head reminds me of the alien game mode of cod ghost (don't remember the name)
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It looks pretty cool and has a nice concept. I'm not really a fan of the back of it though, front looks nice though. I would say you should black out the upper parts of the set on the back similar to how it is on the front, that would make it look a lot better in my opinion.
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@The7thVoid: oi thanks gives me a good feeling

maybe like that ? and yeah i could try to make another set matching the current head \o/

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Hey

Grey wrists, hands and feet look bad.

I think the first head was better.

Last image of back of set is good - change bicep, elbow, tricep to merge into wrist (mimick style from rest of set)

Use neck joint - merge into head then dilute into black space and original head

Change colour of first head to match set
@Deuteria: thanks for the nice feedback Deutaria helps me alot
@cave: same thing for you just thanks for the help
@veoo: your feedback is boring lmao, not fun to read, looks like you were lazy to write a good feedback, no variety in sentences. The brown thing is a brush just btw. thanks though
Last edited by BlueEvil; Apr 18, 2016 at 12:32 AM.

Water Melon, Fire Melon, Earth Melon, Air Melon... The ELEMELONS!
woah woah woah
sorry felt like you were being personal
i kinda like you to
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Last edited by BlueEvil; Apr 18, 2016 at 02:11 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump

Water Melon, Fire Melon, Earth Melon, Air Melon... The ELEMELONS!