I like the shader choice, it goes well with the song
the cc was a little too bright though, tone it down, other than that I love the cc.
The twixtor was somewhat okay, but there was hardly any sync, and there were definitely sync points in that song, if you don't know how to view the waveform of the audio you use try doing: View menu -> Audio Event Waveforms or Ctrl+Shift+W

Sync points look like this in the waveform^
I also really don't suggest moving the black bars, it looks really weird, no matter how you use it imo, however, I did like what you did with them at the end, I found that somewhat funny.
The blur was really weird and didn't fit into the video, try using a light burst like
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Overall, the edit had a nice little atmosphere about it and I enjoyed the 10 seconds of it.