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[VID] sherm



Music: Sherm- Moon Mode & SLIGHT- tsunami

Replays: Dezrai

Programs used: After Effects CS6, Toribash, and Action!
I'll write something longer but what I the biggest problem I see are the transitions, you keep taking the camera away slowly or out of pace with the replay behind it, when you could easily cut the clip and use pan and crop to make it look smooth or just fade it out, or anything else really
the transition where you can see the moon/sun is a bit choppy. i can see exactly where you change clips because it wasn't executed that well. (look between 0:05-0:06, you can see it suddenly change positions). perhaps you should speed up the transition so its less noticeable

its good to vary your camera distance, but i think you made too many close passes with the lasy replay

the transition to the next song wasnt really done well

the tempo sped up but i dont think your replays did
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