Software: I don't really know. Personally I use reaper to record my vox sry that Idk what other guys use.

very neat, reminded me of hanging revelations lyric video
def will follow your stuff

be sure to add programs used to the OP as well

Let me preface this by saying that given the higher quality of this content compared to the usual posts in here, I'm going to be more critical of it as well.
Going to be assessing this as I would any song, not just a hobbyist one.
As the tradition in the art board is, here's the criticism:


This was a at times a bit all over the place composition and mixing wise.
I think what has happened a bit is the classic "this sounds empty, let's fill it up a bit"-syndrome everyone has to struggle with. Especially in the mixing stage.
There's nice simplicity to the riffs most of the time, not going too tech when the point is just to rev which is great.
From a thematic standpoint the brutality is reflected pretty well and the vocal performance sounds good and "slappy". Alltho the mix could've been a bit grittier to reflect the violent nature of the track.
From a mixing stand point I do not have other problems with the track. I do have small grievances with the kick drum tho, but that's just a really small thing for a picky person like me.
The guitars are nice and thick while being clean enough to make sense of them.
I feel the main issue with the track is that it suffers from the fact it has too much going on regarding fillers.
The reverb filled backing guitars and wide panning on everything creates a hard to follow feeling to the track.
Legendary tracks like Messugah's bleed literally have almost everything in the middle and no fillers anywhere, yet it manages to be hard as shit.
Alltho from a mixing standpoint that whole album is poop it manages to convey that brutality through its simplistic mixing and composition.


All in all tho pretty fucking solid work. I really had to get picky to get anything meaningful to complain about. Cheers for sharing!

Thank you all for your comments.
@cowmeat, thank you for your time that you've spended on writing your post.
I agree with you that it sounds overfilled and sometimes it sounds chaotic.
Well, as a some kind of protection can say that it must be chaotic because the main theme of our single is burning Prospero, the home of Magnus who singing it (me). His brother and his father have betrayed him. He lost his legion, his home, his creation and so he lost his mind. He turned into a chaos that's why it seems messy from time to time.
I can't say a lot about an instrumental part of it because I'm a bit far from it.
Must say that we've been hurrying because we've had a challenge with one guy that we can release a single with a feature and with a lyric video in month. We've lost it because I've got micro etc. only at 10th day since our challenge and then a guy who've been singing a feature part was like "Oh sorry I'm ill I'll sing my part... Idk when but I'll do sry sry sry" and then we had troubles with our videomaker etc etc etc.
It's our first try to teamwork as well. We have problems and we will work to fix them for sure. Thank you again for your criticism and sry if I wrote something unable to read I'm still not pretty good in english.

As soon as I'm not a big fan of hard rock music I can't tell that I like it at all because of my music taste, but I see good quality of content here, nice vocal, nice music, great job as for me
Prolly one of 3 or so hard rock songs that I like
Appreciated
Waiting more stuff from you and your band, good luck and gj

Thank you Delayer for your opinion, this is not a hard rock well but thanks anyway.
We are working on our feature album also.