Alright first off, i just want to say this is a massive improvement from your previous post.

The colors in the previous post put me off so much, and although it can be a nice tough to add a 'negative' effect to some things, that just didn't.

Now onto this one.
The shader, and song fit well together, get you in a certain mood +1
The replay choices are good, the slowmotion start of the edit kinda fits in well +1
And finally, the only thing i'd possibly change is some of the angles, most were good but around 6 seconds, in my opinion atleast, that is just a tiny bit too close.

Overall the edit was amazing, and a huge step from the last.

alright thank you! Will work on my angles. I hope to keep improving!

The first scene from the tori cinematic to where the actual edit to say starts is really off sync. I like the colours they work well with the shiny toris. Camera at 30 seconds moved too much I think. Also try to add some more creative effects within your stuff. I like to use a copied layer of the replay and then distort the other layer to get a cool effect around the tori.