why'd you make your pancrop expose so much black at the bottom?

i like everything about this except for one thing:


The pancrop is bad, the black line at the bottom ruins the feel.

As for the rest, the song fits the video well, shader adds a bit of mood to it as well. The timing is pretty good, the keyframes and overall camera positions could be improved a little, other than that this is ok for an edit.

So advice i could give:

• Fix the pancrop, it looks horrible
• Make your camera movements a bit more fluid
• Experiment with different ideas

By experiment with different ideas i mean, think up of a story, or something, this type of generic editing kinda gets boring after seeing so many. Some good examples to me atleast are what Mocucha has done in the past with swexx, etc, having a story behind the tori's in the edit and other things like that. It makes the replay edit much more interesting and brings the watcher in more.