Hello there!

So, I just made some riddim, bc why not? And I want some Critic on it, what is good and what is bad? What needs improvement and what doesn't?

Time spent is about 2 hours and 30 min.

Program is Fl Studio 12 and recording software is OBS.


Thank you for your time ^^

Now fully released, will uppdate with the Youtube releese once it's done.

https://soundcloud.com/lazz-634731558/oblivion

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Try to change that sound at 1:10 scales. I don't understand about making music but, try to make a scale 3 in 3 (not sure if I'm making myself clear). But from 1:10 the background sound sounds repetitive

EDIT: like high notes to low notes

Thanks for the critic both of you

in the video yes

I know it does, I just couldn't bother editing it bc by then it was a WIP and not done, the one up on my sc is the full releese