hi i occasionally do replays, i want u guys to help me improve : )

ignore the names btw im lazy when it comes to replay names

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thank you for the quick response! here's something i did with natejas a few weeks ago

thank you! here's a replay i made a few weeks ago too, just getting back into replay making rn i guess

didnt really like the opener, i think it was slow, i really like the punch u do on uke's leg, it looks so strong, allthough your form could be better (by left bending your lumbar as an example), the knee spin was cool and you just knee dmd by knee hitting a knee, ok then,, split kick and decap kick were pretty cool and pretty fast, pose couldve been a lot better
7/10

thank you so much! i'll keep that into account

here's the first replay i did when i started doing replays, i know its kinda bad but i like it, what do you guys think of it?

did a thing

there was a bit of a weird delay from the hand touching the ground to the launch in your opener, i also felt that launch could be more forceful if you didn't extend the right pec but nonetheless it gave you a good position to act on

the lift was ok but a bit too high, it seemed to give you a hard time on what to do next, the weird tap you did later on didn't really serve any purpose, it was also a bit twitchy

i like the speed of the decap

there was a bit of ghosting when you were dming the hip, i also felt like you could have placed the grab better

good work, just needs a little bit of flow and remove the twitching

yeah, ok thank u ^_^ gonna do another replay sometime

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