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hey! good to see new meat around here
If I had to point out a major problem in your replay as a whole, that would be your rigid and slow movement (have in mind that rigid and slow movement are not bad for its own, in my opinion, it's just not being applied in the best way it could). For example, the only downside of your opener would be the lack of fluid movement. Other than that, the opener is pretty decent.
Your greatest strength is the dms, as far as i could see, i like how your hits connect with each other and their impact is even better than i could do in ukebashing. The uke hand skeet is pretty cool too, i like when people use uke in ukebashing replays! extra points for that
Also, i absolutely loved your pose at the end, it's an important part of the replay imo and you executed it very well
summing up, i still think you have a lot to learn if you plan to continue making replays, but you are not in the worst spot right now, you still can make some remarkable replays if you put enough effort on it!
If I had to point out a major problem in your replay as a whole, that would be your rigid and slow movement (have in mind that rigid and slow movement are not bad for its own, in my opinion, it's just not being applied in the best way it could). For example, the only downside of your opener would be the lack of fluid movement. Other than that, the opener is pretty decent.
Your greatest strength is the dms, as far as i could see, i like how your hits connect with each other and their impact is even better than i could do in ukebashing. The uke hand skeet is pretty cool too, i like when people use uke in ukebashing replays! extra points for that
Also, i absolutely loved your pose at the end, it's an important part of the replay imo and you executed it very well
summing up, i still think you have a lot to learn if you plan to continue making replays, but you are not in the worst spot right now, you still can make some remarkable replays if you put enough effort on it!
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Originally Posted by Lionet
hey! good to see new meat around here
If I had to point out a major problem in your replay as a whole, that would be your rigid and slow movement (have in mind that rigid and slow movement are not bad for its own, in my opinion, it's just not being applied in the best way it could). For example, the only downside of your opener would be the lack of fluid movement. Other than that, the opener is pretty decent.
Your greatest strength is the dms, as far as i could see, i like how your hits connect with each other and their impact is even better than i could do in ukebashing. The uke hand skeet is pretty cool too, i like when people use uke in ukebashing replays! extra points for that
Also, i absolutely loved your pose at the end, it's an important part of the replay imo and you executed it very well
summing up, i still think you have a lot to learn if you plan to continue making replays, but you are not in the worst spot right now, you still can make some remarkable replays if you put enough effort on it!
thanks for the feedback !
also, i made this awhile back
not so satisfied with the skeet
cnc ploz
Last edited by Saiko; Mar 20, 2021 at 01:12 PM.
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Not much to say as it's pretty short.
The opener was a bit slow in my opinion, and the movement could have been a bit more crisp, but I like how you set up for the first dm, that back kick was really nice.
The sneaky elbow dm was kind of odd but i liked how you executed it, made it seem like you got more out of that last kick.
Speaking of the last kick, it was really satisfying, I think you could have gotten another dm out of it but it was good nonetheless.
Skeet was out of no where but it was decent.
Pose was ok but you didn't really flow well into it.
Good stuff.
The opener was a bit slow in my opinion, and the movement could have been a bit more crisp, but I like how you set up for the first dm, that back kick was really nice.
The sneaky elbow dm was kind of odd but i liked how you executed it, made it seem like you got more out of that last kick.
Speaking of the last kick, it was really satisfying, I think you could have gotten another dm out of it but it was good nonetheless.
Skeet was out of no where but it was decent.
Pose was ok but you didn't really flow well into it.
Good stuff.
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