the opener is the best part of the replay so i would be rather displeased if it wasn't yours
honestly the opener being so slow looks super sick, im a big fan until about 300~ where you touch the ground again with the same hand, its a nitpick if anything but it was noticeable enough to me
i found the launch at 220 to be a bit ugly due to your tori being so out of sync, especially considering that you extended the knee so early and didn't wait for the optimal moment
there's a rather long pause in the right leg as you are going for the hits, i understand it is intentionally done for the split but i think it was rather boring, i personally would have went for an elbow or wrist dm so that i could squeeze in an extra dm or two without it interrupting the rest of the replay's potential. decap is nice but i felt it lacked impact afterwards (which personally, i like to move in a way that makes my hits look explosive and satisfying)
the split setup is nice but i don't like the kick very much i think its too messy, its as if you chose the first attempt and rolled with it, which is fine, but i would've liked to see you slice through uke like butter instead of losing so much momentum and being forced to flowswitch
the flowswitch im not a fan of because i just don't like them, but i will say that it is pretty cool, i just wish more dms were had than just a single pec
it makes me sad that you didn't land flush on the floor for the pose, and instead fell over and had to lean on uke, that really removed a lot of the satisfaction for me
overall its honestly pretty cool, i just felt like being overly critical because you bugged me out of nowhere to cnc your replay you fat Loser
honestly the opener being so slow looks super sick, im a big fan until about 300~ where you touch the ground again with the same hand, its a nitpick if anything but it was noticeable enough to me
i found the launch at 220 to be a bit ugly due to your tori being so out of sync, especially considering that you extended the knee so early and didn't wait for the optimal moment
there's a rather long pause in the right leg as you are going for the hits, i understand it is intentionally done for the split but i think it was rather boring, i personally would have went for an elbow or wrist dm so that i could squeeze in an extra dm or two without it interrupting the rest of the replay's potential. decap is nice but i felt it lacked impact afterwards (which personally, i like to move in a way that makes my hits look explosive and satisfying)
the split setup is nice but i don't like the kick very much i think its too messy, its as if you chose the first attempt and rolled with it, which is fine, but i would've liked to see you slice through uke like butter instead of losing so much momentum and being forced to flowswitch
the flowswitch im not a fan of because i just don't like them, but i will say that it is pretty cool, i just wish more dms were had than just a single pec
it makes me sad that you didn't land flush on the floor for the pose, and instead fell over and had to lean on uke, that really removed a lot of the satisfaction for me
overall its honestly pretty cool, i just felt like being overly critical because you bugged me out of nowhere to cnc your replay you fat Loser
[16:26] iris: 😭 /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm KMNFAOFO AOLMF AOFASMO
[16:26] tabby: ???????????????????
0/10 dumb fucking keyframes god ghrteerthhetehrteh
no but seriously its ok, i appreciate the new slow style approach but you are going to run into lots of problems with it as you can probably see in this replay
for starters, you are at a severe lack of momentum, which is why you are forced to flowswitch too much and, despite this (probably) being a manip replay, nothing is happening to uke. he is just floating idly in the air waiting for you to do something and whenever you do make contact with him it is usually pointless, so it makes the replay rather boring to watch
its also worth mentioning that this replay looks more like a lenshu warmup if anything, you are quite stiff and hardly moving during the replay (most notable part being when you go for the lift, your entire body is completely rigid and your leg is fully extended before and after the lift)
the hits are a bit lame but there's honestly pretty interesting tech behind it, i like the use of the grabs after the hits to gain a sudden burst of momentum
i guess my advice would be to have a more clear goal with your replays (as right now it just looks like boredom) and to try to do some more exotic things with your movement, experiment a little!
no but seriously its ok, i appreciate the new slow style approach but you are going to run into lots of problems with it as you can probably see in this replay
for starters, you are at a severe lack of momentum, which is why you are forced to flowswitch too much and, despite this (probably) being a manip replay, nothing is happening to uke. he is just floating idly in the air waiting for you to do something and whenever you do make contact with him it is usually pointless, so it makes the replay rather boring to watch
its also worth mentioning that this replay looks more like a lenshu warmup if anything, you are quite stiff and hardly moving during the replay (most notable part being when you go for the lift, your entire body is completely rigid and your leg is fully extended before and after the lift)
the hits are a bit lame but there's honestly pretty interesting tech behind it, i like the use of the grabs after the hits to gain a sudden burst of momentum
i guess my advice would be to have a more clear goal with your replays (as right now it just looks like boredom) and to try to do some more exotic things with your movement, experiment a little!
[16:26] iris: 😭 /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm /dl slipperyblcv1.tbm KMNFAOFO AOLMF AOFASMO
[16:26] tabby: ???????????????????
