Toribash
Gosh darn golly gee wizz sir. I suppose I bothered you enough about cncing my replay
that I can return the favor.

I just love the replay overall, the style/movement is just so solid.
Anyway, the opener was nice, pretty standard, likin' the spin.
the punch looked solid, the kick as well. I like the transition to/
the kick, looked rather nice, and the skeet looked pretty cool,
was fast. The pose was great, nice to see you got over your twitching
problem.

the replay was a tad generic but still nice, good job.
yournameissolonganditlookskindagaybytheway
wow that
sucked
thanks guys.

I was getting sad for a while.

Here's another little collab with me and Dobby. He wanted someone to edit his first kick (sent it through skype) annnd.... well, I ended up finishing the whole replay :I. Instead of just the kick.

My version sucks.
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[collab]- M- Rawbeds.rpl (500.7 KB, 21 views)
beware
the goblin
Opener was slow as fuck in the beginning. Dam uke.
Nothing special with the manipulation, too simple but it was like you wanted to juggle the hole uke.
Not really impressive hits... Well some hits were unclean and the last hit was weak...
You are better than that!
*May I request CnC?
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The manip was not that great, the only good part was after Uke got some speed.
The hits were pretty good though, but I didn't like how you grabbed for three whole hits, it looks wierd.
The last hit and pose looked really good though.
quite a big twitch at 973, you got hit my uke at 858 which almost never looks good, 832-750 was very awkward overall, you barely tapped uke with your toe on the first hit and completely froze in there air making the hit seem substantially weaker than it actually was, the hit at 634 was quite odd due to you landing directly on your head at the same time, the last hit would of been a good ending to the replay, chasing uke for the last dm seemed to stretch the replay out a bit too far

10/10 I LIEK THE BOOMHITS
Last edited by millie; Feb 7, 2013 at 11:02 AM.
The core hit was like a knife through butter.
The manip was okay, not too impressive, but you somewhat kept Uke's flow.
Gud pose.
Thanks for the responses guys. Had a feeling it wasn't very good, but I wanted to see what I'd get for the core or manipulation parts.

Same can go for this one. My replaymaking skills are going through a fade-away again. Make sure to dl my new set!
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[TK]- M- Criminal Minds.rpl (395.7 KB, 15 views)
beware
the goblin
The first kick had great penetration, I loved it.
The next hit was very strange. I think I've never seen a hit where you don't move your leg at all, you just push Uke into your leg (and still get a motherfucking boomhit I mean what).
It's not a bad thing, it's quite unique, and it definitly better than a boomkick on the ground. Those are the worst things ever in -30 replays.
The next kick was alright, using the same grab for 2 hits is usually a mistake, but the decap was just awesome. I loved how you didn't go for the regular decap punch, this one looked much better. Great job.