The art board is for helping others. Nobody is going to improve if all you say is "no sync bad replays bad music bad shaders 1/10" If you aren't going to be helpful I see no reason in posting.
The video was actually pretty good irrita, the song choice wasnt bad and neither was the keyframing. There is always room to improve and I'm sure you will. For better keyframing you can try to space out each key frame every 100 frames, just work on making it nice and smooth, you might have to try a few times to get it perfect. The replays were alright, sync would have helped but it honestly isn't needed for a video to be good. You might want to look up a free editing program to see if you can get something better than movie maker. I'm looking forward to the next part of the video.